Month: December 2016

Compulsary Task Part B #1

The fair breeze blew,the white foam flew, the furrow followed free:we were the first that ever burst into that silent sea.

The Meaning:So the meaning of this is that this was straight after the ancient mariner killed the albatross,that it was a quiet night and the breeze was all they could hear and the meaning of the burst into the silent sea that the albatross was the first thing to fall into the silent sea.

The Rhythm/iambic pentameter:The fair breeze flew the white foam flew and the rhythm in that is blew and flew because they have the same ending which brings in the iambic meter because if you put a simple beat while saying the poem with the rhythm.

Alliteration:The example is furrow followed free because they all start with f and the effect of that causes the reader to keep entertained as well as to keep the iambic meter going also.

A:Compulsory Task

Once upon a time a little boy went sailing with his mother father and the rest of his family.But this were not an ordinary family, they were a family kin of best sailor in the world ”ward cunington” he was the first person to sail from one country to another. Eftsoon the family went inside the deck to have there tea,the young boy and the rest of his family were sultry, they each gave out garment but they mingled the clothing about so that everything was fair.Then straight after tea they went outside on the deck the floor was sheen the withered prow was about to disappear.as soon as the bright sky was about to fade away the mother, the father but both of there to children to bed turn the ship lights off and the boat was like it was deserted.When the sun rose the little boy woke his sister up with hollo, but the sister shroud at his brother for waking him up as if he was fiend.A few hours later when everyone was up suddenly the father who was walking down the stairs he slipped and fell over, he was not waking up anytime soon the mother felt pang.10 minutes past the father still is out the little boy and girl were dimal all of them did not know what to do, so they brought the father back to his bed.The mother did everything she could cease the father from fully passing out and eventually the father awoke, he went straight to the side of the boat and noticed keel so he stopped the ship and fixed it then they headed for their home.